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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。
As is vividly described in a proverb,it is unwise to put all egg in one basket.We will face a number of troubles and challenges in our life,and we can't solve them at a same time,we need to learn how to separate them into little questions,and we will feel easy to make it by this way. Why we say it is unwise to put all egg in one basket,there are three reasons.Firstly,it is obvious that if we make all the egg in one basket they will be broken down easily.In other words,we can not solve a large problem at once.Secondly,if we want to find a way to deal with a big problem.We must be afraid of it,and lost confidence to solve it.Lastly,if we cut it into small part,it is said that, we use several baskets to set eggs.It will be hardly broken down. To sum up,We must learn to make a big problem to be several little problems.Only by this,we can get the best measure to make it.Therefore,it is unwise to put all eggs in a basket,we should put it in several baskets.
