2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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china improved the safety standards of high level death rate business, and pledged to close at least 2000 small coal mins by the end 2015. Those coal mins did not respect safety rules, annual output of less than 9,000 tons, built on the unsafety resourse, easy leading accindents. Meanwhile, China will not approval teh annual capacity of less than 3,000 small coal mine.