拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket These days, there is a general discussion about the issue of whether to put all eggs in one basket. Some people believe that we can have a good harvest if we put all eggs together, while others argue that we'd better learn to disperse our egg into different palace to ensure our gain. Personally speaking, I intend to show how unwise it is to invest all things into one field. Firstly, we may draw a blank if we put all the eggs in one basket and it break. The basket is frail, and more you put into it, more possible it will break, otherwise, it will become more and more heavier that you will feel difficult to carry it. As a wise person, we'd better learn to separate our things to different aspect, leaving ourselves more road to retreat. Secondly, it limits the development of us if we just look at one point.Different people have different ability but not all people can find out their potential. Trying different aspects can help you to find the right road, however, if you just devote yourself in to one field, you may find that you have wasted a lot of your time in an unsuitable way but ignore your real ability.How regrettable it is! Finnaly, from what we discussed above, we can conclude that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.