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it is my pleasure that my foreign friend will come to visit my hometown. i would like to tale him to the Shawan Baomo garden in my hometown.The reason why i take him there is because there is a really beautiful place .Firstly, there are many fresh flowers and trees in the garden ,he can feel relax himself in here and breath in a fresh air .Secondly, he also can enjoy the time of catching the little golden fish in the river .thidly, he not only can eat many different kinds of hometown food ,but also can visit a lot of place of interest in Baomo garden.Baomo garden is a very interesting place for him ,i hope he will enjoy the time in here.
