2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题TASK2

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练。

With the increasingly rapid development of the urbanization and the strikingly prosperous business in commercial society,countless cities are thriving on their size and poplation.As many economists said,the development of industrialization are sweeping all traditional structure with an unparalleled rate,in the long river of human civilization.Although what the awesome establishment achieved by the industry and the prosperity can bring numerous benefits to residents,especially citizens living in large cities,such as convenient traffic,abundant resources,extensive relationship and astronomical chances,etc.,some experts,including anthropologists and sociologists,hold the view that the quality of life in large cities is decreasing with an alarming rate.Indeed,everything has its pros and cons.And in my point,this deterioration has its root in economy and social problems. As for its sources,indubitably the decline of quality relies on economic vicissitudes.For instance,the living cost is booming incessantly when intense people infuse into cities which can provide highly paid employment and comfortable facilities.Actually,especially in developing countries,it is the centralization of the population that makes the real estate price consistently surging.Moreover,in spite of the rising expense on rental,food,traffic and so on,dense population also has adverse influence in the social security.Really,the resplendent progress in large cities not only attracts diverse talents in the field of science,technological skills and management,but also elicits multifarious skunks who can just loiter around the street at night.Therefore,the upward rate of crime,including theft,roberry and vandalization,is attracting more attention than before. Thus,coming up with specific policies and taking action to debar this diappointing trend are urgent for the government and perhaps parliament where senators have the prerogative to erect law.Firstly,the governement should make reasonable plans for promoting economic development.In the past,many famous cities experienced horrific caprice of economy,because of reckless plans and too emulous ambition,thus making the advance of cities too huge and too quick to control themselves.Secondly,the bureaucracy layer should provide timely salvage and then the possible assistance to those keeping unemployed and impoverished.In regular circumstances,most crimes is because of the hopeless fact and helpless lonesome.Through directing the poor and the homeless to return to their normal condition,most security troubles may be solved. Overall,on the basis of above ratiocination,in some extent,the deterioration of life in large cities is caused by economic expansion and social movement.And personally thinking,it is clear that almost every country which is experiencing industrialization and urbanization could probably confront with this irksome phenomenon.However,what is more significant is that people can cope with this issue by feasible plans and sound practices.