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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46262
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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I'm reading the book Otheello, the ancient Greek epic poem, written by Homer. I think a lot about out fate after reading. This moring, read another short article which is about fate too. What's our destiny? Can we fight against it? Or we have to follow it? I think the destiny is not a simple destination. It's a path to your destination of life. Like Othello, the pains he bared during the journey and the happy ending he gained after hard struggle, both of them were his destiny. As it is said that no pains no gains. This end is created by your struggle. Your struggle is a fate which has been prepared by Gods. Sometimes you believe you have changed the fate, or you can fight it. No! If it can be changed, it isn't the fate. You just changed the reality, not the fate. Your struggle for a change is a part of your destiny, which has been settled for you much earlier. We are controled by God. Nobody can escape from the destiny.

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