Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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I'm reading the book Otheello, the ancient Greek epic poem, written by Homer. I think a lot about out fate after reading. This moring, read another short article which is about fate too. What's our destiny? Can we fight against it? Or we have to follow it? I think the destiny is not a simple destination. It's a path to your destination of life. Like Othello, the pains he bared during the journey and the happy ending he gained after hard struggle, both of them were his destiny. As we heard that no pains no gains. This end is created by your struggle. Your struggle is a fate which has been prepared by Gods. Sometimes you believe you have changed the fate, or you can fight it. No! If it can be changed, it isn't the fate. You just changed the reality, not the fate. Your struggle for a change is a part of your destiny, which has been settled for you much earlier. We are controlled by God. Nobody can escape from the destiny.