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浙江省杭州市2011-2012学年八年级英语下学期期末考试测试试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:30浏览次数:3380
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紧张的初二学习就快结束了,同学们在一起讨论这个暑假干什么,下面是同学们讨论的结果。请你根据下面的表格把学生的们讨论结果写成一篇短文。
Name
Activities
Reasons
Tina
Go to Beijing
1.     To see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing
2.     have fun
Jim
Stay at home
1.     Too tired and have a good rest
2.     ……
You
……
……
注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
 2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
     3. 词数:70个左右。开头的部分内容不计入总词数。
   Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result:  
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Tina will go to BeiJing.She wants to see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights.Because she thinks China is a rich and colorful national,she likes BeiJing.And she will in a beautiful place to have fun. But Jim has a strange idea.He didn't want to go anywhere.He wants to stay at home.Because he thinks travel is tired.And stay at home will have a good rest. Though have mach homework, I want to go to Tibet.Because there are stretch as far as the eye can see grassland and gathering in crowds and groups of cattle and sheep.I think it's very beautiful. Where are you want to go?

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