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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Appearance was given by our parents,in spite of it is good-looking or ugly we should love it. Appearance can give others a good impression,maybe it can help you get a good job or more chance,but appearance is not everything.Except appearance,our skill is a tool too. We can't judge a person by their appearance.As we all know,our great president Deng Xiaoping is a short man.However,it didn't stop his to be a great person in China.We should judge a person by whether he or she is warm-hearted,smart and friendly. What's more,everyone hope to have a good appearance.But we can also be a confident person without good-looking.Confidence is not built in appearance.We should get as much knowledge as we can,it can help us to be a better man. We can have a bad appearance but we can't have a bad heart.As for judge a person,I think heart is more important than appearance,so we can't judge a person by their appearance.

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