单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中从句使用过少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Today,I'm very tired.In the morning,we have a Chines test,about write word. Then,we are be math class.We are be Chines class,then math class too.I don't like this.In the afternoon,like morning too,math class and Chines class.Read book,write on note,listen,talk......It's boring!But all this for a important test,It's graduation test.Hard study,review a lesson!I maybe don't know the lesson from A to Z.