单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中从句过少;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Today,I'm very tired.In the morning,we have a Chines test,about write word. Then,we be math class.We are Chines class,then math class too.I don't like this.In the afternoon,like the morning,we have math class and Chines class.We read book,write on note,listen,talk......It's boring!But all this for a important test,It's graduation test.Hard study,review a lesson!I maybe don't know the lesson from A to Z.