2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I 'm so glad to hear that you are coming to visit my hometown,and i hope can take you to some beautiful places in china.when we come to BeiJing,i know there are so many which i think it is great ,however ,the great wall is the most great and interesting place in my heart.not only it is a great wonder for the world,but also has a long history in china.There are a lot of visitors from all over the world come to China just to visit the great wall.Like the old saying goes :he who never been to great wall is not a ture man. I truly believe that we will have a great time.I can't wait to see you to and take you to the great wall to enjoy the scenery there.'Because it is really worthing to see .I think you will love it .I 'm looking forward to seeing you in BeiJing.