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It is universally acknowledged that The Dragon Festival is a traditional festavial in China. For me i think is not only a festavial ,but also a day to memorize a great poemt of Qu Yuan.people usually celebrate the festavial by doing some special food which is named ZHONG Zi.On the day of Dragon Festival,people can eat a big dinner and to watch dragon race.who wins the race can recieve some awards,so everyone who take part in the race wil try their best to win for the good reputation. For many years ,this tradition is never stopping,and today The Dragon Festival attracts many guests to China.Just like chinese like to celebrate Christmas Day.Our festaval is becoming international.I hope people from other countries can know more about China by this way.I think it will be better and better in the future.
