2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to my hometown .there are many beautiful views.such as mountains ,rivers,temples.Also we have special food ,vegetables,fruits.Local people are very friendly to you.I can take you many places to travel.I believe that you wil like this.We can go to the park,visiting cute animals.Dogs,cats,cows,donkeies,pigs,chickens.If you are relax and exciting ,we can ride to farm.