作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Our life is limited,so we should spend it for something that will outlast it. If you didn't do something meaningful,nobody will remember you after you died.It is a disappointing thing.If you didn't do something meaningful,you will feel bored when you are old.Just as the saying goes"you can change your life's length but you can change the width of your life." To make my life more meaningful,I will do something as follows. First of all,I will read many books and get lots of knowledge to improve my skills.secondly,I will learn many languages so that I can travel all over the world by myself.What's more,I will learn to play the guitar to help me keep a good mood all the time.Finally,I will live with my parents when I graduated from university because they will become older as time goes by and the time I can stay with them is limited. All in all,we should do something meaningful in our limited life and become a better man.