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Fristly, I want to take my American friend anna to Beijing ,eating delicious duck and seeing the great wall. Whats more,I would like to take her to GuangZhou,because there are many delicious foods and many interesting place such as Baiyun mountion 、Changlong play-park. Thirtly,I would like to take my friend to Hongkong,which is a beaustful contucy.There are many things .