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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71659
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Fristly, I want to take my American friend anna to Beijing ,eating delicious duck and seeing the great wall. Whats more,I would like to take her to GuangZhou,because there are many delicious foods and many interesting place such as Baiyun mountion 、Changlong play-park. Thirtly,I would like to take my friend to Hongkong,which is a beaustful contucy.There are many things .

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