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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1943
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, there is too much waste on some campus. You can see students leaving their dorms with lights on. You also find that many a student, after washing their clothes, doesn't bother to turn off the tap, leaving the water running. If you go to the cafeteria at dinner time, you are likely to see tables covered with the remains of all kinds of food. Waste is very harmful. If you are extravagant with your money, you will soon be poor. Likewise, if human beings recklessly exploit the natural resources, then they are sure to have a gloomy future. What's worse, being wasteful is a bad habit that, like a drug, gradually erodes a human being's virtues. Once a person grows wasteful, the virtue of frugality is eroded within him. As far as I am concerned, I am determined to set a good example to combat waste, trying to use every grain and cent and call on more schoolmates to realize the necessity and importance of frugality. Only in this way, I think, can we hope to put an end to the waste on campus as soon as possible.

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