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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
注意：这道题不要泛泛地写媒体的优劣势，而应集中在influence what people think is important.
提纲：
Negative:Manipulation of the mass in politics, consumption, value change
positive:1.Call for national action for public interest 2.Promote awareness of some important issues
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
With the increasingly rapid development of market economy and the unstoppable tendency to commercialization,there are extensive advertisements all around cities and even villages.Obviously,advertising is inevitable because businessmen have to take advantage of it to promote their commodities and enhance their fame,who have legal rights to do so.While the businessmen and the media are exalting the significant role that advertising has played in quotidian life and its immense effect,many experts,including anthropologists and psycologists,hold this view that rebundant commercials are influencing our own judgment and ability to make choices.Personally thinking,what those academicians said is partly convincing in regard of current expansion of commercial promotion,but everything has its pros and cons. Apparently,advertising must attract consumers as much as possible,so that editors and makers of advertising have to utilize perfect information,even bogus instruction sometimes,thus making people confused about what is truly important and helpful.For instance,there was a businessman living in China,who used the media in a large scale to promote his recipe and elixir which can keep people completely healthy,even though people have no need to go to fitness club or hospital.Just after a few months,the so-called master,who ever induced numerous believers through advertising,was revealed relentlessly.So,superfluous advertising may contain fastidious information and erode the wisdom of making correct choices. Moreover,the flamboyant actors and actresses who are employed to promote commodities,and the resplendent background made by special arrangement,have both generated virtual demands for products.For example,in recent years,smart phone has been extremely popular,which is the result of authentic technological advance and partly the crazy promotion.Nevertheless,most functions which the smart phone has cannot be used by most ordinary people.In most cases,using a smart phone is just a token of being unable to lag behind the information era.Thus,unbecoming advertisements nettles people to spend money on what they do not need actually. However,just because commercials have negative effect cnnot be the excuse of abandoning them.Indeed,advertising still has several benefits which can provide convenience to daily life.Firstly,advertisements can express the basical information and main functions of products,which makes consumers familiar with what they may buy in advance.Secondly,the industry of making and editting advertisements is also a colossal deparment which can create plenty of employment. Conclusively,on the basis of above ratiocination,advertisements really influence people's judgment and produce negative effect.At the same time,the advantages that advertising has cannot be neglected.Therefore,the government and parliament can erect relevant law and take feasible action to cope with the shortcomings,such as the surveillance of the content.
