2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My foreign fiends--Mark intends to visit my hometown.So,I am planning to take him to the most interesting place--The Great Wall.It can learn about the China culture. The Gret Wall,it has approximately 6,000 kilemeters.It is originated the Qin dynasity.It was used to transmit the message in the ancient war as a multiply tool.To our surprised,without any cranes,it has built by the labours with a pair of hands.As a matter of fact,it isn't only signed the ancient peoples' wisdom,but also signed the power of labour.As a chinese saying;if you don't arrive to the Great Wall,you won't be a hero. As a chinese student,I am convinced that it is great necessity for us to take our foreign friends to visit The Great Wall.We should advocate and encourge our friends,classmates and acquaintances to take their foreign friends to visit more china intresting places in order to learn about china culture.