2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

My foreign fiends--Mark intends to visit my hometown.So,I am planning to take him to the most interesting place--The Great Wall.It can learn about the China culture. The Gret Wall,it has approximately 6,000 kilometers.It is originated in the Qin dynasty.It was used to transmit the message in the ancient war as a military tool.To our surprise,without any cranes,it has built by the labours with a pair of hands.As a matter of fact,it isn't only represented the ancient persons' wisdom,but also represented the power of labour.As a Chinese saying;if you don't arrive to the Great Wall,you won't be a hero. As a Chinese student,I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to take our foreign friends to visit The Great Wall.We should advocate and encourage our friends,classmates and acquaintances to take their foreign friends to visit more China interesting places in order to learn about china culture.