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A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. Nowadays,we can get lots of information through internet.News is renewed all the time,and it cause we can't pay attention to one thing.It is called information explosion.There is so much news that we can't get which one is right,we need much time to find whether it's right or wrong.In modern society,people always have more important thing to do so we can't spend lots of time in reading all the news.We may get some wrong information and the wrong information will lead us to a wrong way. To avoid being distracted by irrelevant information,I will do something as follows. On the one hand,I won't read messages all the time.Maybe I can't get the newest news but I can save my time to do more important thing.What's more,only when the news became no new can I get the right news.On the other hand,I only read news that from some official internet. In this called information explosion times,we should recognize which is right or wrong,we should only spread true news.