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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5748
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. Nowadays,we can get lots of information through internet.News is renewed all the time,and it cause we can't pay attention to one thing.It is called information explosion.There is so much news that we can't get which one is right,we need much time to find whether it's right or wrong.In modern society,people always have more important thing to do so we can't spend lots of time in reading all the news.We may get some wrong information and the wrong information will lead us to a wrong way. To avoid being distracted by irrelevant information,I will do something as follows. On the one hand,I won't read messages all the time.Maybe I can't get the newest news but I can save my time to do more important thing.What's more,only when the news became no new can I get the right news.On the other hand,I only read news that from some official internet. In this called information explosion times,we should recognize which is right or wrong,we should only spread true news.

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