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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。

用户练习作文:

As the result of a survey on appearance's puzzle show,almost two second of them adimitted that they usually judge a person at the first sight of their appearance,which sometimes may lead them mistake somebody and bring about misunderstanding.Thus,as for me,it is really unwise to judge a persone only according to one's appearance. First of all,nobody can choose his own appearance which is originally born in nature.In addition,one's appearance can not really be a standard of judging a person. one's characteristic ,quality and ability are more important factors which can reflect a person's true personality and what he is.Appearance,i think,is just a shallow sense to make someone feel temprarily comfortably.However,take for instance,a beautiful lady often impresses you a lot,then if she readilly throw litter on the road,how can you feel at that time.Moreover,a good look does not represent that she or he is intelligent or skilled,which is greatly considered by some interviewers in almost each company. To sum up,it is unwise to make appearance misunderstand one's correct judgement.A good man does not necessarily possess a good look,a good-looking man in turn does not necessarily possess good qualities.

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