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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

用户练习作文:

As the result of a survey on appearance's puzzle show,almost two second of them admitted that they judge a person at the first sight of their appearance for the most part,which sometimes may lead them mistake somebody and bring about misunderstanding.Thus,as for me,it is really unwise to judge a persone only according to one's appearance. First of all,nobody can choose his own appearance which is originally born in nature.In addition,one's appearance can not really be a standard of judging a person. One's character,quality and ability are more important factors which can reflect a person's true personality and what he is.From my point of view,appearance is just a shallow sense to make someone feel temporarily comfortable.However,take for instance,a beautiful lady often impresses you a lot,but if she readily throws litter on the road,then how can you feel at that time.Moreover,a good look does not represent his intelligence or ability,which is greatly believed by some interviewers in almost each company. To sum up,it is unwise to make appearance misunderstand one's correct judgement.A good man does not necessarily possess a good look,a good-looking man in turn does not necessarily possess good qualities.

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