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Poeple always say that, to see is to believe.But too often, it's unwise to draw a conclusion at the very moment we see or hear something. From where I stand, the reasons is as follows. On the one hand, we may just happen to witness one side of this thing coin, missing the other side. For instance, we hear someone talking bad of others, but before that case they may say his/her good. On the other hand, everyone has his/her own opinion on things. As an old saying goes, every audiance sees a difference Hamlett. So we should not only see what others see or say what others say, we ought to figue out what things really are by ourselves. In short, we have to keep awake at the point of hearing of seeing something unexpected, and try to find the truth, instead of drawing a quick conclusion, which may be wrong. Wisers don't always believe what happen before them.
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