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Dear my friend, I'm really cheered up when I got the message that you would come China and viist my homeland soon. I'd love to show the most interesting and wonderful place for you and sincerely hope you can have fun in my hometown. When it comes to Sichuan, my homeland, Wolong nature reserve is worth being noticed. Have you heard of panda? It is the most treasured creature of our country, and Wolong nature reserve is referred to The Home of Panda. In Wolong, you can communicate with this cutest animal face to face., and obverse the daily life of it. You will found it not only likes sleeping and eating. What the more interesting thing is that you can observe how the feeders take care of the panda baby. Besides that, don't think that you can only play with panda. In fact, Wolong nature reserve contains thousands of kinds of wildlifes. It means that you can enjoy your time with these lovely creatures and the fascinating sight. But I must mention you that you should take your attention on protecting the environment while traveling. In a word, Wolong nature reserve is a great place to spend your holiday. I'm waiting for your coming!
