语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练。
we have social life ,we have touch each person all kinds of human .be honest ,be lied , many no honest person ,i suppose to make one honest man .why ?because ,be honest to make people kindness , beautiful ,we are make friends ,in the world will filled with love .