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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒。
we have social life ,we have touch each person all kinds of human .be honest ,be lied , many no honest person ,i suppose to make one honest man .why ?because ,be honest to make people kindness , beautiful ,we are make friends ,in the world will filled with love . when you met a not honest people ,you'er feeling depress .For example :if you ask road ,that person answer you is a wrong direction , you catch interviews in hurry,so ,because you missed interviews time ,be lost a job .you are feeling slouched over and shoulder hanging down ,that's terrible .right ? like this so many ,so ,we will to make a honest person .
