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【题目要求】
Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
【题目讲解】
这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要]，而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多，可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。
两个问题。引言3 sentences之后，1. 讨论二者的利弊，看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法，看合段的结论3 sentences。
起段引言 Introduction
开头第一句。申论主题：使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。
开头第二句。集中焦点：冲突是两难自解。
开头第三句。一分为二：分头指引讨论二者利弊。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。
As konw to us all,people go to the libruary for ready or look up some imformation they want.It is very convenite for pubulic to absorbe acknowledge,however,as the time goes by,people get imformation from different ways ,for example,using internet ,is more easier and quicker than going to the libruary.whenever you want to look up the imformation just need to open your computer,almost everything you can find in the internet.On the one hand,the internet provide a easy way to get imformation,one the other hand it also give some trouble for us.I can give you a example,when we look up online ,we find that there is too much advertisement which we don't want to see,so it really waste your time on these boring advertisemnt.On the contrary,libruary can avoid them,and can save your time on it.Both of these two ways can make full use our time for study or work,they are our good assistants which we can't live without.In my opionin,i will use two of them to help me to accomplished my work or study.They are really helpful for us all.
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