2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中有较多拼写错误，用词太过单一。

Now the famous campus have become the tourist heat point and the campus whether open for students diferentpeople have different opinion I think the campus should open for tourist in suitabale time because the campus isnot only a school but also become relic history which is belong to the people ,the famous school is popular whith many peopel ,the famous colleage campus is benifit for students in many ways