2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowadays,people in the large cities are facing a big problem about the quality of life decreased.I think we can be divide in to two main reasons.The first one is the pullution of the environment,and another is health and working pression.With the development of the economic,the public can earn more money than before ,so lots of them will use the money to buy car,it really provides a convernient way to them to go out,at the same time ,it is also cause many problems to the environment,expecial for the air.Another pullution i want to say is the factory.It produces too muchwasted water and exhaust to the river and sea.All these pullution will cause healthy problems for citizen.In this hustle and bustle world,people have to work for living,further more ,they have to solve the difficulties from work.Under the work pression from day to night ,so the quality of life is decreasing quickly comparing to the past day.In the street ,it is hard to see a man with a smile on his face.I always ask myself why people don't feel happy. It is very important for us to change the situation. In the first place,we must plant some tree to help to absorb the pulluted air,and we also can tell the public to concern their health.The govement should build more psycial facilitise for citizen.The most important factor is people should learn to relex by themselve,not push to much pression on them. I truely believe that we will have a better life in the future if we follow these advice.