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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Leaving something outlasts than your life "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it", what's your feeling when you glance this sentence? Different people have different opinions. As for me, I feel it tells us a truth that we'd better leave something can stay longer than our life. Firstly, our life is limited, while the world is infinite. Why we can know many celebrities though they have died? The most important reason is that they had left something for us, their short life can not stop the running of their permanent impact. You may say that we are just normal people, however, we can also try to leave something useful to our offsprings. Secondly, the sentence encourages people to live a more energic and meaningful life. Every one has the right to choose their way to live, I guess the writer wants to advice people to live a more useful life. If everyone does their bit to leave something good for our society, we will own a more harmony society. Finally, from what we have discussed above, we can conclude that learn to live a meaningful and useful life is not only benefit ourselves but our society. Therefore, from now on，try it!
