2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

丰富的使用了长难句；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

My hometown is beautiful and inrich ,my home town has a lot of inters ,now i would like to introduce my homentown as following my homentown is seat in shandong ,there has a lot of famous interets of china ,the taishan is famous all over the world ,it has 1000 meters height ,it has a lot of view of the mountain ,the mountain is on the sky