拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Happiness is the ability to deal with problems.We will meet lots of problems in our life,and we will feel happy after we solved them. For example,we will meet lots of problems in study.Only when you solve them can you get good grades.If you didn't solve it,you may stop in your study and it will make you feel unhappy.What's more,we can't avoid to encounter problems.Problems make us lead a better life. As far as I'm concerned,we should do something that can develop our skill to deal with problems as follows. First of all,keeping a good attitude all the time.Just as the saying goes"attitude is everything."Having a right attitude is having a good beginning.Secondly,making sure what wrong with the problem.Furthermore,learning to ask others for help.What's more important is paying all your attention to solve the problem.Finally,we can see some jokes when we feel sad and always having a smile in your face which can help you to deal with your problems. All in all,just relax yourself when you meet problems and happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.