句式变化多样;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
its unwise for everyone of us to make a conclusion at one ,what we should do is think about it with our brains ,everything has two sides of it , the positive and negative side. you can think it carefully with your known knowledeg to judge it .if you quickly make a conclusion ,you will not find the deepen mening of something that really wants tell you or let you recognize .
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