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Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Lanzhou to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful,so many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from some people around you.So do your best to talk with people in Chinese. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Lanzhou. Love, Chen Quan