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新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达(2):给大卫的一封信

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:58浏览次数:2959
要求:
根据汉语提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。

   假设你叫陈泉,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到兰州来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Lanzhou to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful,so many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from some people around you.So do your best to talk with people in Chinese. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Lanzhou. Love, Chen Quan

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