作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,that is very right for people.People always use a most of times to do one thing which is adventurous in sometimes.For examples,if we use much times in one problems so that we can't finish exams in time.It would make our scores can't attain normal level.So i think that we should pay our attention at proper places not just one place.