语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;高级词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误。
Nowadays we all live in a modern society which is filled with a lot of information,so almost everyday we can get many different types of news including video,picture or sound. But because of this,most of us may easily draw a conclution about each information they gained without any thoughts. It's no doubt that it's unwise to draw conclutions before justifing it, for this behaviour is very likely to result in big problems, such as misunderstand and even worse. For example, if a news title which describes a woman killed a man is read by people, i think many of them may think the woman is bad, while maybe the woman killed the man just because he wanted to injure her baby and she just wanted to protect themselves, and then we can see that drawing a conclution to quick is not wise enough. All in all, before we do anything we need to think for at least 3 times as well as making a decision or drawing a conclution.
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