2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,people become more and more rely on computer,we use computer to finish our work,shopping and chat with our friends.It is said that computer and internet change our life,they make some influence in our life. On the one hand,computer makes our life become more convenient.We can chat with our friends online,and we can see our friends even they are far from us.We can go shopping without going to supermarkets.What's more,computer makes our environment become cleaner.We can write our essay on the computer so that we don't need paper.As we all know,paper is made from trees. On the other hand,computer will take some bad effects.For example,it will spread some bad news which will lead some people to a wrong way.Some people may feel guilty because of this bad news.What's worse,some students may be addicted to the Internet and it will influent our motherland's future. All in all,everything has two sides,we should make full use of computer and at the same time,we should avoid those bad effects.