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It is not advisable to get the conclusion in moment with the quick pace of society, the morjority of the people wil consider this is a fast society. on account of the competing is exteedingly firce. the new medie is emerging industry,however,which play a significance role in our daily life.due to this communication tool gives rise to many problem people freqently listening somthing who will get the conclusion right away.for instance, those who was thought a undesirable when saw other person face. for one thing, you fail to assess according to others behavior. may be someone was making a little mistakes whilge you encounter.for another thing, you unable to listen you believe is right,just like the fox has not eaten the grape, it told other animal the grape is soar. from my own perspective,i support that everything we should be felt by our heart,you must not judge by your listening or seeing.sometines your eyes would cheat you.take account all these factors, it is not advisable to get conclusion right away
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