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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉。

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It is not advisable to get the conclusion in moment With the quick pace of society, the mojority of the people wil consider this is a fast society. On account of the competing is exceedingly fierce.The new medie is emerging industry,however,which plays a significant role in our daily life.due to this communication tool gives rise to many problem People freqently listening something who will get the conclusion right away.For instance, those who was thought a undesirable when saw other person face. For one thing, you fail to assess them according to others behavior. May be someone was making a little mistakes while you encountered .For another thing, you unable to listen everything that you believe is right,just like the fox has not eaten the grape, it told other animal the grape is sore. From my own perspective,I support that everything we should feel by our heart,you must not judge by your listening or seeing.sometines your eyes would cheat you.taking into account all these factors, it is not advisable to get conclusion right away

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