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Some people think inviting large foreign companies to set up factories in developing countries is helpful for local economy, while others think that the foreign companies should not be allowed to build their factories in developing countries, instead, local companies should be encouraged in order to develop local economy. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
With the increasingly rapid development of the globalization and the replendent advance of multifarious technology which makes the world trade and communication more convenient than before,countless enterprises locating in developed countries begin to focus on underdeveloped areas where the labor cost and the expense of utilizing natural resources may be low in most cases.However,there are rising debates about whether the benefits of allowing exotic companies to launch programs outweigh the shortcomings,among experts who can think about this issue with their professional knowledge and local residents who can experience the authentic influence imposed upon them by outer guests.Personally thinking,inviting foreign companies to establish factories has apparent advantages,although everything has its pros and cons. Actually,it is obvious that applying advanced technology and management experience could have phenomenal effect on nudging the sluggish economy to improve.Mostly,developing countries have relatively short history of industry and the service economy,thus making them insufficient to step into the higher economic stage from the entirely agricultural economy which ordinarily cannot fulfill the prosperity and progress.Thus,inviting foreign companies coming from developed countries which have enough experience and ability would provide what is inadequate in developing coountries. Moreover,what is more influential than bringing the experience and technique,is the generation of enormous demands for the workforce,the raw material to construct architecture and logistical service.Indeed,from the perspective of economics,uncounted academicians,including sociologists,philosophers and especially economists,hold the view that the foreign companies will offer an initial momentum and then a kind of catalyst to activate the economy.In economic doctrines,the primitive power to provide energy to the langurous is fundamental for those areas which are lack of capacities themselves. However,just because the establishment of puissant factories cannot warrant flawless results.Actually,there are still several harmful aftermaths after the operation of those factories.First of all,what is always reported by mass media is the startling pollution caused by many factories,because they intent to transport their latent pollutants to remote regions from their own countries.Secondly,another crucial trouble is the frequent conflicts between the managers from their motherland and the local citizens,such as workers,engineers,and accountants.Sometimes those conflict can transfer into armed fights and even small-scale wars. Conclusively,on the basis of above ratiocination,there is no wonder that many people will dispute about the potential consequence of giving admission to foreign companies.In my view,in spite of those various possible caprices and disadvantages,the importance of taking advantage of advanced enterprises is indubitable.As for the weaknesses,the government,including the local government and the mother country,and the parliament can erect law and take feasible action to cope with those irksome troubles.
