Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
This picture can be naturally associated with the overuse of the mobile phone.In this picture,people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. In contemporary society,it has a phenomenon for people to purchase,own and overuse the mobile phone.In many occasions,it has become a new trend for people to talk about the phone.As a matter of fact,overuseing the phone is bad for our life.It isn't only harm our health--can decrease our eyesight,but also can lead to the people become seldom talking and the same it can subduction our strong will. As a college student,I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to take down the hand of phone.Do bear in mind:We aren't the slave of the phone.
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