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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

The internet In the modern society,internet plays an important role in our life.The topic of the advantages and disadvantages of the internet is also hot.There are a lot of views on it. As everyone knows,different people have the different opinion.Some people think that is more beneficial.They believe that can make the study and work effective.What's more,it can also relax our mind and body.But the others don't agree with it.They consider a lot of shortcomings.Such as addiction on the internet,which makes you out of control yourself.Seriously you will lose interesting on the study.For me,my view is different from theirs.Internet is good for us,also bad to us.On the one hand,if you use it properly it may be a lot of use.But on the other hand,if you use it only for satisfying yourself it is a bad thing. In a word,one coin has two sides.So does internet.

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