2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

it's not smart to make a conclusion without thinking Nowadays ,many people are not believed the evidence in paper but only believed things they saw or overheard and they make a conclusion without thinking twice .it's not a wise men should do. in my opinion , in the one hand ,what you can see may not be true or not the entire truth .we should make a conclusion after we are thinking twice and find something to support it.otherwise we may be get involved in something are unnecessary but we don't know.and if we saw something is not true and we spread it to other or come it to internet ,it will make a bad influence or cause something terrible ,such as the women who had thrown the pet from high building and looked it come to death ,it's not a right massage but someone put it on the internet and more and more people believed it was true ,so that almost everyone wants to find the woman out and treat her with bad attitude ,it take a big influence of her and she can't live a normal life even it was a wrong massage .so we should judge by what we saw ,it may cheat you and cause a matter. in the other hand ,don't make a conclusion instantly after you just overheard something,it may cause some misunderstanding ,so we should thinking and judging after we heard something whether the things are right , if we can make a conclusion depend on it . the truth are always covered with lies and we should find it out ,and never be cheated by it's cover,like the old saying:"don't judge a person bu it's appearance ".