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Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic to many students that whether we collect coupons and look for group-buy deals and so on can make us smart consumers. For my point of view,I hold all this ways may not make us smart consumers.To begin with, it is important to recognize that when people buy coupons on internet, are fundamentally bound with a lot of informations that urge you to buy more.Your performance is generally correspond to your money tha you need to consume on coupons.Besides,other reasons are it will spend your time.The important of time is that if you make the best use of it you will get so much knowledge,but on the country, you spend your timeon how to search the way of saving money and then it much same as you are wasting your life. From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that it is not a good way to buy coupons and look for group-buy ways and so on.