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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33620[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic to many students that whether we collect coupons and look for group-buy deals and so on can make us smart consumers. For my point of view,I hold all this ways may not make us smart consumers.To begin with, it is important to recognize that when people buy coupons on internet, are fundamentally bound with a lot of informations that urge you to buy more.Your performance is generally correspond to your money tha you need to consume on coupons.Besides,other reasons are it will spend your time.The important of time is that if you make the best use of it you will get so much knowledge,but on the country, you spend your timeon how to search the way of saving money and then it much same as you are wasting your life. From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that it is not a good way to buy coupons and look for group-buy ways and so on.

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