托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Some people think living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.I didn't agree that idear.Living rural always means living far away from downtown,you're far away from schools,hospitals,malls and banks.It is not convenient to your life and your family's life.Living rural area you have to spend a lot of time on traffic.Whenever you want done something you have to plan a head.Living rural area also means you disconnect with the modern life.You may have little information about the social change.Even you have free time and money you don't have the facility to entertainment. You always lack contact with your colleague and friends.It may infect your career.So in my opinion unless you have enough money you should better not live in the rural area.