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My good friend name is Tu ChenHui . She is a goodness gril .When she has time to take care of me . We are glassmates in high school . In high school we usually do homework together . She become my good friend is ten years old . We look like sister when everyone looks us to say . I want to say thank to you - Tu ChenHui .