托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Some people think living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.I didn't agree that idea.Living rural always means living far away from downtown,you're far away from schools,hospitals,malls and banks.It is not convenient to your life and your family's life.Living rural area you have to spend a lot of time on traffic.Whenever you want done something you have to plan a head.Living rural area also means you disconnect with the modern life.You may have little information about the social change.You don't have the facility to entertainment even if you have free time and money. You always lack contact with your colleague and friends.It may infect your career.So in my opinion unless you have enough money you should better not live in the rural area.