新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

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Dear David: I'm glad to know that you will come to Lanzhou for studying Chinese.For you want to know how to learn Chinese,l will talk with you about my felling. In my iponion，firstly,if you want to learn well you should better come to our China and communincate with our Chinese people then you can speak Chinese often.Secondly,studying and writing Chinese words,then read some Chinese books. I hope you coming quickly and l can help you study Chinese. Yours sincerely, Chen Quan