2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

My English friend Mary told me that she won visit my hometown in a few days.I will take her visit Baise.The reasons why I took her visit Baise are followings: In the first place,Baise has a long history in China and it is called red field.In 1929,war was beginning in Baise,DengXiaoping called some active people to fight against the people who wanted to fight China.In the second place,Baise's people welcome to all people to come to Baise,because they hope their culture can be known by everyone.In the last place,Baise has very beautiful sight to visit,such as Chengbi lake and Baise Uprising Memorial. All above,Baise is a wonderful choice if someone wants to visit,I believe that Mary will enjoy her travel in China.